Poetry by Jim: She said NO

/ Jim McDonald

Poetry by Jim: She said NO

 

a sad response
is easy to feel
a cheerful joy
would be ideal
but no such action
remains insight
for the sinking ship
sank tonight

 

by Jim McDonald

2 thoughts on “Poetry by Jim: She said NO”

  1. I’m not depressed at all, but if I want to write blues songs or poetry, I can’t write about happy things. That was the meaning behind the poem “Blues”, if I write blues people think I’m depressed.

    Blues are my favorite music and I want to write blues.

    Thanks for the concern my Georgia Peach. 😉

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